All Comments on 'Monday Mayhem Day 07'

I'm not into girl-on-girl, regardless of what they say about "all" men; but the way you handled this was so different that I really enjoyed it.

I'll have to eat Chinese food more often. Oh, wait -- I don't have a twin.

This story mostly makes me sad that there's not more material like this to read. The Freaky Friday concept always seemed to have a pretty strong undercurrent of eroticism to it, to me, but my searches for this theme in erotica haven't yielded much, and certainly nothing remotely this good.

I enjoyed the sex scenes more than I normally do (and I found the first scene with Kristen to be impossibly hot), but honestly the part I liked the best was the sparring at the dojo. The concept of adapting strong skills to an unfamiliar but strong body led to some wonderful writing there.

Oh you have such a great story line and premise, with hooks in their to keep the story going. Please write more! I figure there is some event or issue that necessitates the twins switching again to take advantage of their initial strengths. I loved the whole story especially how complex their gender became.

That last comment about how sex could still switch them back is awesome. I am a sap for twin love

where is chapter 6. You are missing the switch back. And lets have some follow up stories.

I agree with previous comments. Now that they know they can feel each other's arrousals and know how to change back, I can see a Chapter 6. And I can see Misty and her brother going thru the mind change. Awesome content for a Chapter 6. Very original material in this story. Would make a red hot video.

But agree that it appears that Day 6 is missing. Enough references were made to cover the gap, but for whatever reason the chapter wasn't written or just not posted, the gap is hard to miss. Still gave it 5*, but ...

Obviously, Erica arranged to have Oliver catch her and Kristen together.

Great story, well written ... it skipped a day, is there another part missing?

http://web.archive.org/web/20150404040110/https://www.literotica.com/s/monday-mayhem-day-06

http://web.archive.org/web/20150404040110/https://www.literotica.com/s/monday-mayhem-day-06

The wayback machine links don't seem to go anywhere. Nothing's archived. Was chapter 6 ever posted?

You may need to edit this link. There are no spaces in the link if when you past it into your browser there is a space delete it. I think it is cause by the wrapping of the text.

http://web.archive.org/web/20150404040110/https://www.literotica.com/s/monday-mayhem-day-06

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