All Comments on 'Monday with Amanda'

by Anton_Pirelli

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IamfirehorseIamfirehorseover 4 years ago
You should continue the story

That was a really great short story. It needs to continue:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good opener

Great short story with a lot of potential to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
love it

Really love the story. I hope it continues.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeabout 4 years ago

Great story. A fantasy any server or office drone can relate to. I loved the flirty dialog. I think she kept her glasses on the whole time, didn't she? Big turn on.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

What a funny story, i love it

Oldsalty1Oldsalty1about 1 year ago

Fine lead up to that very cute finish! Nicely done!

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M33 / 5'10" / 160 lbs Writer living in the great state of Texas. ————————————————————————— Excerpt from my story "Monday with Amanda" ————————————————————————— "So, do you always flirt with random guys at the coffee counter?" I texted. I'd been thinking about her for hours...