All Comments on 'Monster Girl Adventure'

Love femdom monster stories , keep it up!

Freaking Awesome Man

Is this the end to Monster Girl Adventure?

I loved this one and alot of your other ones. You should do some interactives on Writing.com.

Applause! Very well written and a beautiful ending!

Terrific and extremely creative story.

Wonderful story, it is full of imagination and thought, I was completely riveted by the story and even though im not into pain it all worked so well and I was very very happy that he met a good person to share life with in the end. AWESOME!

Commence rant!

I'll just start by saying I'm not at all into painful domination stuff...what amazed me was how much I liked this story! Great beginning scene, and great pacing of action and story! I mean, I never go into these expecting a heavily plot-oriented read, but your descriptive storytelling really stood out, helping the immersion without being bulky.

Yes finally and ending the I can feel good about

Nice work

Poor poor alexia...

NINA NINA NINA NINA!!!!! WHOOO HOOO!!! = )

..really inventive, I hope you have a few more..

Y'know, there are so many things on my mind I would've spoken to those monster girls.One: I would've sworn to that slug woman that if I got free, I'd pour a bucket of salt on her ass and then she'd be MY meal. The second thing would be the precautionary measures he didn't take after his little sexcapade with the slime girl. I would've atleast try to forge me some kind of weapon out of the environment, such as a sharpened rock to use as a dagger or shank. Next, when I'd be in that arena. Sure, there's no telling how I might've fared personally compared to you, though I'm quite stubborn and have a very high pain tolerance, so I would've called them all some skanky-ass, Na'vi-wannabe hoes who can't get a man to save their life cuz they got the personality of a rock with a superiority complex. Then if she'd tell me to kiss her feet, I'd act like I'm going to but then stab her in the foot with that rock, which would make her bend over on reflex, giving me/you the chance to either uppercut her or stab her in the throat. Then, if she'd try to get pregnant by raping me, I'd say 'Hah! Joke's on you, bitch! I got a low sperm count. Yo ass aint gonna get pregnant!' So many missed opportunities. Now on to the spider-woman, I'd probably make some compliment about her exotic legs since I'm sure that would confuse and fluster her, then question why her and all of the women in the world are so fucked up in the head that they love dicks and sperm, yet find it necessary to hit/castrate the source of that sperm, thus destroying it and forcing them to have to find another one.

Title.

i need more of this story right now HOLY SHIT

I CAN STOP GETTING HARD FROM THIS

also a harem with these girls would be great

It's a classic HammerGod story, yet I still can't get over the attention the types and monster girl species. Very well written.

Although I'm not into any kind of pain other than the stinging feeling given by a set of bare buttocks spanked raw, I loved this tale because of the psychedelic monster girls.

Jeeesus go easy on the lad :D

And ouch at evil vampiress' rectal exam. Ow. Ow. Ow.

...you shouldn't attempt to write stories in the present tense.

(Strictly my own personal prejudice. I've tried it. It's Very Hard to do right.)

who gets turned on by rape porn? wtf

marvelous story and an unexpected ending.

Now that I read this story I imagine I will be hitting back and definitely rape their asses without lube just to make them feel my ire.

Nice twist ending!

11/10!!!!!

This monster girl story was a big disappointment.

NIce humor, and the sex was OK too,