All Comments on 'Monstrous Ranch Ch. 13'

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Bobbin is just the best, I love how you are developing her with her now carrying senya around. Go bobbin.

Loving Senya in this chapter, the perfect malesub, he is able to realise what is happening and give some responses and some conversations. Way better than just getting hypnotized. Bobbin is developing very nicely and this chapter just has the perfect balance between story and sex. Keep it coming!

I really don't like Bobbin. She seems to have more sinister intentions then the other fey. She has been running the ranch since its inception ... I think.... I have a theory that she's been using the masters as a facade while she runs the ranch of seemingly innocent fey.

This main character is just so boring. When is he going to shape up?

So what is the endgame? Obviously we've seen it all before, but rather than individual machinations it's coming together. With a totally obedient "Master" the prisoners will be running the ranch and the fleece sprites made an amulet all but symbolic. I can see Bobbin, despite how kind she seems, wanting to be free, but why is Jerrod going along with it? It's a good cliffhanger to end the season on.