All Comments on 'Monstrous Ranch Ch. 14'

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Really like your stories! The erotic parts are an interwoven part of the story rather than the rest of the story just being transitions between the sex. Good girl! ;)

Eagerly awaiting the next part!

I hope you had a great vacation and have a great holiday!

Fantastic chapter as always- your effortless blend of story and sex is something I rarely see done so well, not to mention your amazing world building and concepts.

One question I do have is when (or if) you will be returning to the adventures of Larya and Alrek- as much as I love Monstrous Ranch, those two have always been my favourite pair!

Whatever you choose to post next, however, I will undoubtedly enjoy. I hope you are doing well and have a good week.

I know people love rooting for an underdog, but this chapter kinda solidifies for me how unlikely it is for our dear protagonist is to become a proper warden of the ranch unless he gets some major reprogramming (in which case he wouldn't be himself). Do you have an overarching plan for the series or do you just enjoy setting up new encounters? There's nothing wrong with letting your characters have sexy fun time, but this feels like it has to come to a head really soon.

Re:Ben

Yes, I do have an overarching plan. The challenge of the Ranch story has been in balancing the smut (which is, after all, the main reason a story like this gets written) with the moral questioning/overall narrative (which is the reason this story in particular is getting written). The next chapter is going to see Senya start to take a proactive interest in his predicament.

If I were to rewrite this as a novel, I'd probably cut a lot of the sex altogether (like the slime girls, the beembos, the lamia, etc) to give it a more streamlined pacing. Thinking that the story goes too slow and is too repetitive is fair!

Re:Anon

I'm not sure when Alrek and Larya will be coming back properly, but I anticipate it being after the completion of Monstrous Ranch. Not sure yet, either, whether it'll be another past storyline exploring their relationship or a story continuing the struggles of Snatch, Anna, Nipper and Yilra.

Things are starting to pick up here, with the mystery of Bobbin, what’s happening with the letters, and what will happen to Senya? Love this series, and the plot isn’t too slow at all as long as enough words are put into developing the plot, something that is done really well these past few chapters.