All Comments on 'Montana to L.A. Ch. 01'

I though this was very well written, not too long that you lose interest, but the way this story is going, i am sure Janelle will get one or both of the girls into bed and not just for sleeping either, can't wait for part 2

I'm liking this already. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I liked this story. Lots of sexual tension, lots of real emotion, and lots of reality, both here in LA, and, I think, up in Montana. I've never been there, but it just seemed accurate to me. Ms. O2 seemed to have been there.

Good job.

Can't wait for more,really hope this story goes farther!

Very nice. I love character development in a story and all of yours do just that. Thank you and keep up the good work.

Oooh, this is getting juicy. This trip to LA is opening up new experiences, new challenges and maybe a can of worms. We already have a hint there was sibling rivalry and Janelle is "feeling" both girls. What us gon do! What us gon do!! (A playful saying my friends & I would use in a sticky situation). Lol - Please tell us O2, what happens next. I'm trying not to wave the morality banner here but it would be foul for Janelle to sex her dead lover's daughters. Why not let them discover their sexuality on their own. The point made about introducing the eldest daughter to bi & lesbian women was a decent touch. Janelle is suppose to have too much class and access to whomever she wants, to lower herself to her "nieces."

Wonderful start. Thanks again for letting us delve into your imagination.

I was starting to tear up at first. Good beginning.

This was a very enjoyable read. It delt with the reality of death and learning to accept it. Thank you for an excellent story!