All Comments on 'Month 01: The Capricorn'

Hot, erotic, lustfully dripping words...and what a great idea!

Smart, playful and hot as hell. Looking forward to more chapters.

Firstly you are a pain in the arse air-head.

Secondly though you think you are wonderful, you are not, have a good look at your ego.

Thirdly as a stupid women you will live your whole life beieving in star signs that are total crap/lies. unfortunately your self importance will never allow you to see your own lack of awareness, you are trapped in the typical feminine garbage of the present age.

and you want to promote it!?

Get off the drugs babe and go out and learn to fuck by giving, not taking.

Do not listen to the loser who posted the negative drivel of a dead turd. Your story was hot and actually had a good plot to make it interesting. I liked the build up to the event and senous way of describing the characters reactions. Seemed real and fresh. Keep it going and build depth with each installment.

This was a fun story with hot sex and an interesting premise. I look forward to the next chapter.

Pleeease do seconds... it is really a good idea. One of a kind here.