All Comments on 'Moon-Eyed Sissy'

So far so good I'd love to see where you take this too.

I enjoyed it, keep it up!

Really well written. Good pace and use of adjectives and adverbs. Great detail. Keep it up (literally)!!!

I loved it please keep it going it made me hard reading it since I am a sissy

Bravo! You are a talented writer and also very kinky - the device where you briefly mentioned Daddy before letting us know how central he was to the story was exceptional

Wonderful, sexy story. I especislly love the dynamic between the sissy and her Daddy. The deflowering scene was wonderfully balanced between intimate tenderness and humiliating submission. Please continue

I liked your story a lot. Sissy and father in law sex is fun. You took a classic story and added extra flavor with the daughter being prudish and the sissy paying the newlywed's debt. Keep writing.

this one needs more chapters