All Comments on 'Moon Flower'

by TxRad

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Marvelous Story!

Like the sun coming up in the morning, if you see a story written by TxRad you can be sure it's an interesting one. This one had a martial arts theme and ended up with some of the most believable erotic scenes I've read in a while. Being partial to stories with an Asian theme I enjoyed this one very much.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread. *wink*

domrogerdomrogeralmost 15 years ago
Weakness

While this is an excellent story and I gave it full marks,the ending was a little weak.I hope that at some time you visit it again and expand the story.

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75 year old guy that worked in the oil fields of Texas for 41 years and writes because he has to..... Nudist, loves the outdoors, ex stock car racer, likes to have fun... If you're not happy then you're doing something wrong...

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