by FranklinSwoon
I loved how llsa took charge and her faithful guard was ever by her side. I enjoy your writing style. Thanks for sharing your time and talent.
This is well written, and I really liked how you sketched the larger universe just enough to make the story feel expansive without messing up its flow. And the sex scenes are such a nice blend of emotional and physical impressions. Good job!
Awesome story, certainly your best so far. Could use a few more chapters. Five stars.
Great story that was easy to read and follow along with. So glad that the princess didn't go for the sex change, I'm sure Hoff was glad also. The sex was but not so graphic that it was over the top, kind of nice, more story for a change. I know, I can go to the non-erotic section if I don't want the sex, that's not what I'm saying. Five stars for a short but well done story.