All Comments on 'More Roof Fun'

It does help if spelling and grammar are checked before submitting a story. Good story a little marred by grammatical and spelling errors.

It IS a hot story, and I'd like to read abt him 'popping the cherry' on the guest.

However, good spelling and the correct use of English, contributes to flow of any story. I do editing once in a while although I'm not registered at Lit.com as an editor.

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Rudy

the story was good like the last one, but all of your mistakes really messed it up. if words were spelled and used right this story would have been a 100.

Just like the first story I loved it. Just like my brother and I it rang all the right bells. Super Sexy Stuff

you should be ashamed of yourself for posting a story in this condition this needs to be deleted. the spelling was some of the worst here and like 90% of the losers here you totally failed to finish it. delete it and all your other stories like the good little loser you are.

Ignore Anonymous. Sometimes I think all those signing themselves Anonymous are just one old pervert pleasuring himself as he drools over the stories. Feel pity for him, he needs it. Your story is a bit far fetched but still has merit, keep on writing.