by candyflossbaby
appriciate the comments guys!
this was my first attempt at writing; im currently in contact with an editor after viewing your comments.
and i'll be sure to change my wine storage from now on :P
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I really liked this, however like another said, don't rely on spell check, find an editor to help you with grammar, punctuation and the use of words.
Great story. I really loved it. However don't rely on spellcheck. Many words are correctly spelled but incorrectly used.. example, first sentence you use wondering when it should be wandering. I really look forward to much more from you. Thanks for your beautiful effort.