by NickThePoet
Parts of this made me laugh out loud. Good stuff!!
What a Unique way of emphasizing Salient Points which established Jack's character. Loved It.
I liked how the employees and boss just stood and watched - neat idea.
Sexy story. It managed to get me a bit worked up.
WAY too little information. Any man simply throws her out or drags her out of his office, puts her in a cab and sends her home. When he gets home later he either sets her straight or throws her out - AGAIN - and divorces her . Stupid cunt. Badly thought out story with not enough information to support the story.
1 star