by bdavidson
it was an okay story but the lack of and misspelling of words was horribly distracting.
That using both HEADS wisely good storytelling. Thanks for sharing.
misspelling, punctuation, and missing words have been corrected, and story resubmitted.
I have read a few of your stories and must say that I am quite impressed with the variety. Writing in the first person you have been male, female, gay, straight, dominant and submissive but seem to do them all justice. I am a heterosexual, but curious and could imagine taking a role in any of your stories.
I don't know if you are male or female, or how old you are (I suspect that you're at least middle aged), but either way I find you interesting. B. Australia
I liked how you wrote this, nice straight to the point, good character, plot and descriptions. I could think that this could/ has happened to a few men that have just lost the wife and a woman looking to shack up again, but just as well think of many men doing much worse to a woman who has just lost their husband.
Good story.