All Comments on 'More Than Just Sex'

by bdavidson

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Okay

it was an okay story but the lack of and misspelling of words was horribly distracting.

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Damn Good Read*****

That using both HEADS wisely good storytelling. Thanks for sharing.

bdavidsonbdavidsonover 3 years agoAuthor
Story has been edited for mistakes

misspelling, punctuation, and missing words have been corrected, and story resubmitted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good writing

I have read a few of your stories and must say that I am quite impressed with the variety. Writing in the first person you have been male, female, gay, straight, dominant and submissive but seem to do them all justice. I am a heterosexual, but curious and could imagine taking a role in any of your stories.

I don't know if you are male or female, or how old you are (I suspect that you're at least middle aged), but either way I find you interesting. B. Australia

oldtwitoldtwitabout 1 year ago

I liked how you wrote this, nice straight to the point, good character, plot and descriptions. I could think that this could/ has happened to a few men that have just lost the wife and a woman looking to shack up again, but just as well think of many men doing much worse to a woman who has just lost their husband.

Good story.

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