by smalltowndude69
I loved reading this story, it is great. You need to write one more chapter to give it a proper ending(happy).
It was good but like he said to her slut. I would never say something like that to the woman I loved.
Very good and well kept story line of forbidden love and taboo romance. Well Done
love the way they just "fit" together as only forbidden love can. Send them to Australia where cousins can have a relationship and get married.
I loved both chapters equally, normally the second doesn't live up to the first, but this one surely did !
The only disappointment is that there isn't a chapter 3....... Well worth 5 Stars !
Rapier