All Comments on 'More Than You Know Ch. 04'

I am SOOOOO happy you are back! Your story is very good and I am glad that things worked out for you and you were able to come back to writing. Looking forward to more :)

So glad you're back and continuing this story. It's a wonderful story and loved it!

Again, WB!! Cheers! :)

...for making my day.

Glad you're back!

so glad to see a new chapter...and what a chapter, its really put a smile on my face! Thanks for sharing!

To be honest I was vuagely thinking about your story this morning before I checked the site, so I'm (doubly?) happy to see chapter 4 of MTYK. I love how well you've included Ana in the story. Its always nice to see a story about gay dads (just for a change of pace)

it´s greate to read you ones more... this chapter it´s greate and can´t wait to read more... hope you post soon the next one....

Thanks for continuing this story. It has wonderful characters and an interesting plot line. I just wish you could write a bit faster.

'Thirteen-year-old girls were the perfect antidote for any kind of ego'... boy, do you have that right!!! LOL!

Great chapter, just loved how it ended!

I loved this chapter….can’t wait for the next one…

I just read all 4 chapters, you made me cry, you made me laugh, you made me happy. I'm sooooo waiting for the next chapter! :)

Keep it going. So VERY VERY glad that you're writing again. CanNOT wait for the next chapter. Please hurry!!

I can't believe there's another chapter. I had given up hope. You don't know how happy you made me :-) I loved this story from the beginning. Thank you so much for continuing it. I can't wait to see how the rest of the story unfolds!

Happy Writing!

thank you so much for "FINELY" adding a chapter to this story... I can't wait for you to add to it.... please keep up the great writting...

Loved the cute title throw in. It fit perfectly!

Also love Ev's character and that she's a sexpot and not merely a 'faghag'. Your analogy of 2 mountains and a molehill drew a quick smile that left me chuckling all day, so much so, that I had to come back and comment. Great job, glad to see you back. You were missed.

I like where this is going slow and steady

Thank you soo much for this chapter. It's too adorable, I love it. Keep up the great writing. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

When you're a good writer and people like what you do, you have to appease your fans by writing more :) in fact, its the cruelest of teases not to finish, akin to getting up and going home in the middle of sex… so, not so long between chapters, please? And just in case it slipped by you, that means you're a good writer snd I like what you do.

I really like how this has an actual plot behind it, and it's not just wild-gay-monkey sex. I have read far to many of those. This is perfect, though. It's got background and a point and it's adorable! They sound like such a wonderful couple!

There is a terrible temptation for a writer to rush into a story and make everything happen quickly, including the sex. You are a master of the art of using a slow pace to build up the suspense and anticipation. Keep up the good work, I love it.

the scene at the end where they're sleeping together is just the cutest thing ever!

The beginning of this chapter may be one of my favorite parts of this story. So funny and still hinting at the strong attraction between Luke and Steven. You write some awesome stories, wish you would give us more.

BAWLING LIKE A GIRL ROMANCE AT LAST DELIGHTFUL BIG J