All Comments on 'Morgana's Gift Pt. 01-05'

You keep throwing stories out that I want to keep reading! I wish you were four people so chapters could come out even faster than they already do

Great story.

Looking forward to reading more!

Awesome story. Thanks for sharing it.

great start, can't wait to see how it continues forward.

Great story, I love it. AAAAA+++++

I've been reading stories on this site for quite some time. it's always disappointing to read a good story and realize that the author hasn't added anything to it for the last eight years or something like that so when I got to the end of this story I thought it was going to be the same thing all over again it wasn't until I looked at the date to see it was just written, can't wait to see the next part of this... hopefully

Morgana's Gift is certainly the story that is moving at the slowest rate, but is continuing to move, with a 6th part coming later this month. Consider subscribing over at my Patreon, as the more people who help fund my writing, the more time I can afford to dedicate towards it.

I'm glad you're not moving the story too fast. Some harem stories have all the characters in place on the first page and everyone's going ATM with strap-ons by the end of page 2. I like that there's enough 'distance' between the characters that I can get a handle on each as an individual, not just as "orgy chick #3 - I think?" Slow build, better building. :)

What a marvellous story. I just love it. You have become a favourite author and l will follow your works I look forward to future chapters this is going to be a grand ride, l can feel it.

Scores 5/5, wis l could give it more.

I also like the moderate pace . No hurry to fuck , fuck , fuck , then fuck , fuck , fuck some more .

Adding more characters and intrigue little by little . GR8 story .

Fantastic. Keep em coming.

Heat came out in '95, not '91. ( Yes that's what I care about when reading smut, accuracy in movie references is my fetish, don't judge me.)

THANKS. You are among the best!

Feel almost a little John Billionaire with a magic twist... But I like

Interesting. But in all your stories, I need to tell you. Alright is not a word. It is two words. All right. Stops me in my tracks reading it every time I come across it. Sorry. I've been a proofreader for far too long. Retired now.

Wow what a story. I think I might read everything you have posted so far. Thank you

Loving it. More please :)

"The wizard brought a fingertip up to Andy's temple and tapped it, and suddenly the memory"

Slight correction might be necessary

Am enjoying this story immensely. I concur with most of the comments already made so I'll not repeat them. And....I didn't realise that alright is not technically correct. But then English was never my best subject unlike chemistry and physics. :-)

It is rare to find a outstanding author and frankly I am savoring my first exposure here, This one has it all: magnificent pacing, narrative, dialogue, and plot line. I particularly enjoy the way you spend so very much time on developing the various facets of each character I also commend you for taking the time to fully develop the tale. This slow pacing provides a comfortable pacing that allows the reader to get more fully involved into your plot and identify with the characters and the character goals and purposes.

In short you provide here a work to be savored. I have included you as an author I will follow, and this tale in my favorites so that I can at a later date, go to my man cave, sit in my favorite chair, and sample my favorite brandy while savoring this tale in its totality.

Congratulations on a fine work of fiction. Of course... 5 stars

Excellent story!!!

Outstanding story in all respects : characters are unique, plots moves along with lots of details but never gets bogged down with too much detail. However, I loved the Tangerine Dream reference best. Been an ardent fan since the Tangram album, and like our hero, has never seen a T-shirt with anything related to them.

quibble:

Our house Is a very very very fine house

with 2 cats...

The misquote in the story could be a typo. The third very would've made it crystal clear you were quoting the CSNY song.

Bit of a mix up here in characters, as you call Kevin 'Andy' once when he's talking to Merlin: "The wizard brought a fingertip up to Andy's temple and tapped it, and suddenly the memory came flooding back in perfect detail -- the car crash, his pulling the unconscious body from the car, Morgana's awakening in time to see the vehicle on fire."

Question! What’s up with all the damn cats? I love cats but I’m allergic

You've done it again - I'm hooked ........... T (of the 5 stars)

"...gas tank was ruptured, and while he knew enough to know the vehicle wouldn't explode, it could very easily catch fire,..."

I love seeing somebody get that right!

Despite what Hollywood tells us, it is ALMOST impossible for a gas tank to explode, unless it cooks for a long time and then MAYBE it will BLEVE

Come to your stories late but enjoying them. This was coating along nicely then you introduced Merlin and I'm wondering what mischief he's planned with the ring.

Thought Ashley was mistakenly used for Elizabeth early on but if that and Andy instead of Kev ard the only mistakes it doesn't detract from the excellent story telling. As for alright it's always been an accepted abbreviation all my life and I'm in my 8th decade.

5⛤

I think "Ravey19" and "Insolan" have covered the small grammatical issues...Enough Sad there...

Ooohhh, boy, first Morgana Le Fey, sister of King Arthur and Queen of the witches/faeries...Now Merlin, Arthur's very good friend and Wizard Extraordinaire...good fantasy start, and I really like this, as I am a great Camelot fan!!

Ready for next chapter...

Five**5**Stars...well-deserved!! 🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌

My first thought was "oh, great, another 'build a harem' story". But I loved If I'm Honest and I'm digging Devil's Details so I figured, why not give it a shot. And I'm digging it! Good pacing, great sex, details on things that you seem to know something about ('cause I know a little something about some of them as well). Well done, my dude!

I was really enjoying this but now Merlin.... fine whatever I'll keep reading

5 stars because Ashley is from New Zealand

I just found this tale. It's wonderful, 5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

First time I read this chapter I didn't think it fitted in the story but this is my second read and it does.

Agree about a New Zealander in LA. Watch out for the Taniwha.

Very intriguing, very different, very good. Thank you 5*

I found that having characters named Kerry and Kelly quite confusing.

Необычно и интересно!)

Great start to the story, you have me hooked!

I love good character development, this story has it in spades!