All Comments on 'Morgana's Gift Pt. 08'

Great chapter. This story is building nicely

5/5

Great story, hope to see lots more soon.

Love the series. Hope to see ma y more chapters soon. Thanks for writing this.

Very nice, short story to introduce a short, matter of fact, but intensely sexy partner. Look forward to her integration into Kevin 's harem.

Great series!! Please continue....

Please keep writing, really enjoying this story

Another great chapter please keep up the good work and really I’m begging please write this to its natural ending.

Loved this chapter and you are one of my favorite authors.

I’m not normally an errors nut, but sugar/sweetener doesn’t change the colour of coffee, along with the famous notebook being spelt “Moleskine”, if you spell it without the “E” on the end it’s a fabric. I don’t know if you use a Beta reader, but minor mistakes would/should be caught by one. Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz. 5⭐️

Contradiction. She said in therapy she kept seeing the little girl's face but a couple of sentences later she said she didn't see the little girl go into the building with her father (who with other men needed to be taken out before they killed anyone) Also this is almost the plot to the film "Eye in the sky" with Helen Mirren and Alan Rickman(his Last film) don't know if it got to American cinemas as it's a British film but poses almost the same dilemma but the girl sells bread outside the bad guys HQ, in a middle Eastern war....and a drone strike. Good film.

Yes Kev is a little naive and I admit I thought Miriam and Elizabeth had set up the van business at the end.

Nice, so Jamer Bond ish. A previous comment about writing orgasm Sean's, women cum so much more fun and for a longer duration. I can deal with being less amorous ?

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Really enjoying this series, look forward to more!