All Comments on 'Morgana's Gift Pt. 09'

Talk about flipping the coin…. nice!

That was the weirdest quickie I've ever read. I wasn't expecting the zombie hoard aspect at all. It was a bit creepy, tbh. Also, the abruptness of how everything popped back to "normal" was a bit off putting, but I'm going to guess that was the point.

I see this Midas Day thing becoming even more trouble that it's worth. Both for the MC and the author.

On the one hand, he was kidnapped and raped. He could note the license plate and report them.

On the other hand, they were compelled by the true villain, Merlin. I hope he didn’t catch an std.

Been a great read soo far. Definayly looking forward to more. The miss day thing was about of a non starter for me but can definayly see it saying in a point of interest later of Morgana find out.

Genuinely snorted at the last sentence. Well done.

wonder if morgana can fix midas day

I'm hoping the style can evolve to a place where the relationship development feels more organic. So far every interaction is either orchestrated by madame Elizabeth and the women are coming off as her stable of high-class escorts, and/or they are magically contrived fans of his failed music career.

Really hoping this story has legs and you can continue to bring out more interesting girls/women into an ever evolving harem. Enjoying it so far.

Keep them coming!!!

Gotta say I'm enjoying the storyline but the sex scenes are doing nothing for me

He needs your HELP. Fuck Merlin off

Well that was an interesting twist.

I’m not really into non-con regardless of which sex is on the receiving end, although it could be argued he’s getting a taste of his own magical benefit c/o Morgana. Not my favourite chapter you’ve written.

Non-con's not my thing. In the context of the story I can see it as a bring-Kev-back-down-to-earth plot device to make sure his ego doesn't get too big for his britches. I can see the humour in it, in an Axe commercial kind of way, but I can also see that the tone would be VERY different if Kev wasn't a Kevin but a Cathy, if you know what I mean.

Story started weird, is getting weirder by the chapter but I'm enjoying the ride. It's clear that you've had fun writing the story.

Absolute bonkers but I loved it.

Would be funny if he was extra fertile that magical bypassed birth control pills. And knocked up a couple of the harem.

Ooohhh...ho...ho...you other readers are SSSSOOOO funny how you wanna say this was non-consensual and kidnapping/rape...Kevin should have paid attention to the date(s) so this wouldn't have happened!!

As it is, FOUR college girls converge on him, save him from the throng that just got bigger...and Jade fucked his brains out to put a stop to the Midas Day...LUCKY KEVIN!!

Ready for next chapter...would like to see Morgana show up, just to see how THAT all plays out. Morgana and Merlin, both messing with Kevin's life...

Oh, yeah, did Ashley maybe send the cavalry, somehow feeling he needed help??!!

Five 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 Stars

Thats one of the funniest endings....th rest of the days was uneventful..... lkl

These ladies seem to be part of a squad prepared just for this specific situation. They even have a uniform.

If a dude is cursed to be pursued by women for a day until he gets off or he runs out the clock, this seems to be the least-harmful solution.

Классная идея для дня!)