by CorruptingPower
Great series! You have a great writing style for my visual brain. Each character is distinct and quickly comes into focus for me. Thank you.
Didn’t think he’d accept the lawyer. She seems too unethical for him. Also, that level of stupid is super below bimbo.
I was looking forward to the meeting with Fatima’s father! Why did you skip it?
Besides that, I love this story, as well as all of the others, that you are in the middle of writing.
Sincerely,
Daniel