by CorruptingPower
If the child star is just venturing out into the new genres, how did Ashley know about her songs?
Lol well dam now I have another of your stories I will be waiting on more of.
I know you are busy with your other book but please don’t let this one die. Very interested to see where it goes.
Really enjoying this series. You have a way of leading the story in delightful way, that pulls the reader in. Hope to see much more of this series soon. Thanks for sharing. 5 stars for every chapter. Tom
Love all of your stories and can not decide if there is a best, though Morgana is right there.
Make a Book 2 !!!!! Delicious Reading !!!!! Plot and Structure are Great!!!!!. Have been reading your Stories for a few years now.I don't like slamming into a Concrete Wall at the end of a story. I am well versed in English Lore History.Myrrdin and Morgana Lefey.
Are u your sure it's not Champagne Super Nova
"How many special people change?
How many lives are livin' strange?
Where were you while we were getting high?
Slowly walkin' down the hall
Faster than a cannonball".
Oasis so I guess not
wonderful story with great imagination. Fun to read, great progress and well written, too. So far the good points.
Considering the complexity of people, there is way too less what's going on emotionally and privare between the harem. So they add an loyer to the family with special needs - but then getting absolutly ignored. When they fuckt, she wants to FEEL the afterglow instead of overthinking things. So this part did not end by sqirting up, it should have hat an equal part of the emotional cuddling and taking care feeling after sex. Especially to be known to last for two hours, they should make it count for the lawyers satisfaction&wellbeeing.
What about the other women's lives? Did Ashley do well in university and is she happy? What about fittness training progress - and what about the restaurant idea/wish of his personal chef+trainer? What about the wish to get bred and pregnant of his security ex-mossad lady? And the lawyer is the older sister from Jax' security guy's girlfriend doctor? Would'nt it make sense to get into an little progress between the hatem & staff like having some BBQ or grillparty together sometimes? What about the guitarist from the music equipment store and some playing together with his drummer friend? She needs money and got the talent - why not develop an collaboration together for his own next record - produced by himself and DR? What about the social intermission between Dany Trejo and Rodriguez? They where having an taco dinner together.. but nowhere mentioned about. What about his sex intercourse with that blonde moviestar and her assistant at his Meddle Day? Any contact after to make / stay some friends or business contacts? What about the dragon? I guess it is ok to ignore the housecat, but sometimes the cat and dragon should be mentioned about, because they live there together and are part of the daily life. Maybe there is an social relation between the cat, dragon and some of his wifes? I had turtles and birds and they did play together. I had an dog and cat, and they took there daily intercorse in the family and how they react to my friends or especially with my girlfriend.
So there have been introduced so much great persons / charakters, but it seems they mostly got lost afterwards. It is an really great story about many fun topics, i guess it would be an absolute blast to mention / integrate some more emotion and interaction between them.