All Comments on 'Mormon Initiation'

First, this story is well written and I can relate to it on a sexual, fantasy level.

I have read about Christian Domestic Discipline to maintain the gender role belief. My religious views match Marty's so I believe that there are regious cults screwed up enough to practice what is described in this story.

At the start, I was put off about the lack of respect for women and not treating us as equals. Marty redeemed himself by twice asking for consent and generally treating Tabby gently. The last oral sex was not in character and was nothing short of a mouth rape. In the end, I gave this story 5 stars.