by DocWords
Cute story! Sometimes you don't need a Novella! Sometime in the future You could come back and add a chapter or three to this one!
Cheers
SAGE
Yep needs more chapters to this, and one on one time, aunt lil needs some
4⭐️
Very hot! I disagree with SAGE, however. A novella length story would have been awesome!! Five stars and a favorite point.
Great story. You had me laughing out loud with the dialogue. 😆 So good. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Loved it, straight to action and slme backstory sprinkled in. I hope more adventures are Cumming our way.
Great short story...I would love to see it fleshed out another 2 or 3 chapters!
Excellent story. I especially appreciate the insight into how to orally please a woman. Thank you. I also enjoyed the causal incest among the family. A great fantasy.
Get your story straight. You said Beth left the room, but suddenly Lil is talking to her as if she never moved.
To anonymous: Beth left the room and returned about five minutes later. It states that in the text. If there was another instance that I missed, you have my sincere apology.
Sounds like there's some family history to share expand on in future chapters. More, please!