All Comments on 'Morning BJ'

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oldsage_1oldsage_1over 1 year ago

Cute story! Sometimes you don't need a Novella! Sometime in the future You could come back and add a chapter or three to this one!

Cheers

SAGE

MeanderlwcMeanderlwcover 1 year ago

This was a fun story to read

01Timber6701Timber67over 1 year ago

Yep needs more chapters to this, and one on one time, aunt lil needs some

4⭐️

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 1 year ago

Very hot! I disagree with SAGE, however. A novella length story would have been awesome!! Five stars and a favorite point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. You had me laughing out loud with the dialogue. 😆 So good. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

walt555walt555over 1 year ago

Loved it, straight to action and slme backstory sprinkled in. I hope more adventures are Cumming our way.

chiefhalchiefhalover 1 year ago

Great short story...I would love to see it fleshed out another 2 or 3 chapters!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69over 1 year ago

Does momma want to adopt me?

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyover 1 year ago

5 Stars. That was good - more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

That's ridiculous and written for the pleasure of those that can't laid

morbiusrgmorbiusrgover 1 year ago

Excellent story. I especially appreciate the insight into how to orally please a woman. Thank you. I also enjoyed the causal incest among the family. A great fantasy.

MWF171MWF171over 1 year ago

Great story, interesting, held my attention

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Get your story straight. You said Beth left the room, but suddenly Lil is talking to her as if she never moved.

DocWordsDocWordsover 1 year agoAuthor

To anonymous: Beth left the room and returned about five minutes later. It states that in the text. If there was another instance that I missed, you have my sincere apology.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Sounds like there's some family history to share expand on in future chapters. More, please!

muskyboymuskyboyover 1 year ago

Excellent as always! Thanks! 5/5

SiodisSiodisover 1 year ago

Keep this story going!

starbanestarbaneover 1 year ago

Great! I hope there is more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

he could get all three knocked up?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

One of the most enjoyable in a long time! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. Fun family!

G

rbloch66rbloch66about 1 year ago

Well, that was fun!

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