All Comments on 'Morning Routine'

That's it? No confrontation? This started as if it could be a very good story but then it just wasn't. Maybe a rewrite where the husband acts like a real person would act.

Big letdown.... Big bad officer is just a Pussy whipped cuckold. I agree with SwordWielder. Burn her and the doctor, then sue the office for them screwing on company property DURING company time... Fix this and make it RIGHT.

His wife is clearly a bit submissive and the Doc has played her. Predators deserve to suffer the consequences. On another note-we seem to be getting overwhelmed on her with Cuck stories lately. I for one would prefer a warning before I start reading. It's getting to the point where I will only read certain authors.

I expected an entirely different ending from the way this was written. Great description of how I suppose a police officer's mind would work, and then, thud, a wholly inappropriate ending for the alpha that a cop has to be.

I don't even buy it! Every cop I have ever known would have kicked the door in. The personality profiles of men in a position such as this guy wouldn't just stand there listening through a wall. He would have been going through it! At least he should have told her she smelled like a dick.

Incomplete story, don't you think?

Where is the rest of it ?????

Nice.. Is there going to be a part two?? It kind of left us hanging..

Meh.

Listening through a wall and hearing clothes hitting the floor, slurping and swallowing and getting aroused hearing his wife servicing someone else? Really?

Where’s the story?

unfinished

until the story is finished.

Disappointing..started off well but then downhill....could be better...has yo have a revenge sequel at least

Not realistic at all. So the husband of one of the staff clinicians comes in and the receptionist notifies her that her husband is here. The wife then continues to take her time making coffee and blowing the boss instead of coning out to see her husband, if only to get rid of him so she can continue having her fun. Not bloody likely. And the big bad cop is a cuck, too? Give us all a break.

In your defense, "cuckold" is in the tags. Otherwise agree with others, wife is cheating skank slut who will give him STD's or worse. He is beyond a sissy wimp

The writing style, plot development all work.

Surprise surprise that the author paints a cop as human as the next guy.

Good job twisting the psychology.

MLJ

So much potential, such an interesting and unique way to start a story, then...... a coffee cup becomes the focus? Call me slow, but I don't get it.

I didn't care for this. I guess I'm just not a cuck at heart. Next time try something with some consequences for the cheater.

So he's a narco officer, an Alpha type and loves his wife. But suddenly he took wants to be a cuck just because he doesn't think she loves doing it? He's not even mad that her "boss" has manipulated her? And he's gonna let her kiss him with cum breath? Ugh what is it with these same old situations you guys cook up. He suddenly just lost respect for himself? Not likely.

Fix it. He should have burst in and arrested the bastard. I interrogate the wife and then divorce her sorry ass.

Officer Cuck….

Very hot story please dont stop 👍

Is there really a market for these stories that are never finished?????

He's a fuckin cop and not enough balls to kick in a damn door and confront the cheating bitch? Wrong on so many levels

Started of okay but then ended up as a wimpy cuck story one star.

Okay!

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I hope you are planning to write a sequel.

Otherwise I just wasted time i'll never get back reading an unfinished story.

All I can say is that this story had a good start, but you forgot to finish it.

Pathetic. Just had to turn the cop into a cuck. Not likely. No cop I have ever known would have responded that way. More likely would be the psych being broken in pieces with his tongue missing.

Lots of words, but little story. Weak at best.

Great last line! 5 stars. Joe Wimpmeister, Badge 337, isn't a shining example in blue but the story was well constructed to lead to the punch line. 5 stars

I hope he shows more balls than that on the job.

He should quit his job and go become a crossing guard. On second thought, that requires more balls than he is displaying here.

Cop as punk, to some academic stud; makes sense. How long before the cuck is giving the blow jobs?

WTF. No cop is going to let this happen. The psychologist would have resisted arrest and been severely injured around his face and genitals.

Nothing believable in the least. Cop wouldn't react this way even if he was a closet cuck and wife would never react that way literally seconds after what she did. And the receptionist knows about it apparently??? Cheating rarely ever stays hidden when someone else knows about it.

A promising writer with five stories and just 39 followers (as of May 30) says a lot. The writing was detailed but frenetic. It flows like 90-weight motor oil in an Arctic winter. The ending felt like an insult to the reader, like OP, MC, the wife, and Shrink just had a laugh at our collective expense. All build-up and no climax.

No man would allow that . Most would kick Door in knowing she was cheating

Started out Great! But I was expecting him to bust his wife in the middle of her blow job. Who does she think she is to pull that crap at work? Then Hubby doesn't even bust her while she is doing it. Let's her get away with blow jobs for her co-workers? LOL Na man, that don't work. 5 stars for a good try. This infers that she gives out blow jobs everyday and that hubby is good with that! Great Start, lousy finish! Thanks, Buster2U

When your wife asks for a kiss you kiss her, a little sperm never hurt anyone

Dope story, subtle. Would love a continuation where he lives with this feeling and then tries to relive his release again.

Wierd, why would he get off on that?

I didn’t rate this story not really sure how since doesn’t seem finished? I was hovering between 3 and 4. Ultimately chose not to rate since doesn’t seemed finished or it is doing the JPB style!?? The JPB style of open ended story doesn’t always work for me as a reader. Sometimes it is effective but not in this story! Just my thoughts! Good luck in your continuing writing!