by JenPB
Good premise.
But the sex was too one-sided. No reactions from him made it boring.
And you need an editor/proofreader. You had her put her hand down his PAINTS when you meant PANTS.
Three stars.
Very nicely told story, and very erotic. All men hope and dream that women love sucking their cock as much as you relate in this story. A fantasy come true!
I continue to love reading what you write. You have a way with words that make your writings special. I love the view point that you give with this one. Thank you and keep writing.
Very, very, very few men will complain if you wake them this way. As a matter of fact, most men fantasize about it.
Do not hesitate to try it if you're curious. He may get the hint and try it on you some day :)
I love mornings like this! The sense of ownership and relinquishing ownership to her with the drop of my heard to the pillow. The flow of heat and energy with the wrapping of the lips. I love it when she sleeps with her head at my hips, ready for action. I like it even better when my head is also at her hips…
Like you were right there next to me whispering in my ear. Like your lips were on my own cock.
For this play by play journey so few, were so dedicated to, have shared better.
I have only dreamed of getting a BJ like this. You have finally brought it to me.