All Comments on 'Mother and Daughter'
by gaggedKitty23
- 11 Comments
Anonymousover 6 years agoPlease consider writing more to this story, it was very hot and exactly what I needed, being away from my own Master tonight.
macisgreatover 6 years agoWell written, moved the action along with urgency. I gotta know what happens!
Anonymousover 6 years agoWe need to hear about the other daughter and the friend upstairs, and the gangbang with Julio. I hope we hear more about how all three were captured. I hope future installments will include lots of slave training. After all, there's only so many times Master can cum... He'll have to find something to fill the empty hours between fucks.
My only quibble with the story is that it doesn't sound very authentic to have an Indian woman named Rhonda. I'd have given her a note Indian name. Or made a point of talking about how Americanized she was (in fact her parents would have named her, so her family has probably been in the US for generations--but if so, it seems a little is that she married an Indian man). Or make the mom white. I'm not saying there couldn't be an Indian woman named Rhonda, just that it makes their background an shallow facade.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoThis story is awesome! I hope you continue!
TREKnRayabout 5 years agoI gave this five stars. I wish Literotica authors would learn the meaning of prone and not get it confused with supine. Otherwise, it was terrific.
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