by gaggedKitty23
I know I liked the first part, I rated it with 4 stars, but I do not intend to read it again. We will see how it turns out.
This was a excellent awesome fantasyπππππππ I hope you continue with story. I love to find out what the sexy toy was and there training will beππππππππMmmmmmmm
Despite having spent a year, I enjoyed it immensely. Again 4 stars Please continue the story but do not take so long this time
I think you did a great job. Had no problem with the amount of anal. They are slaves anyway. Do not expect a love story. Keep it up and get even more nasty. Have the daughter strap on the mom in all holes
Your prose, writing style and intense involvement of torment circling the mother, her rapists and the two daughters is exquisite. I'm about to move on the 3rd installment---very much looking forward to it.
HJere a thought the three women overpower Jolio the tie him down a peg him to within an inch of his life and he becomes a slave to a transvestite for the rest of his life
Got half way through page 2 0f chapter 2 and it just appeared to be cut and paste from the first chapter. The first chapter was a good start but then on just repartition. Hope all your work isnβt like this.