All Comments on 'Mother and Daughter Ch. 03'

I definitely hope you will continue with this in future, I love your dark twisted imagination. Very very good😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

I just binge read your three stories, and other than incessant descriptions of rape and torture, I don't see the point here. Is there a plot? Why did Gary choose these three women to kidnap and sexually torture? Why did he owe something to Julio and his crew? Is there a husband/father associated to the three victims? What business are the torturers in? Drugs? Why do they hate women so much? Is there a graveyard out in back where the bodies of previous victims lie buried? Have they been reported as missing persons?

I know you're a good author, for example I loved your stories 'The Predator,' but I'm afraid I find as concerns these three stories, for it all to be pointless and, ultimately, a little boring, despite its unbridled cruelty. I'm sorry, but I'm sure there are others who have enjoyed them. -- JB

But I think you should stop here

Over the top, excessive, and not erotic.

read all three chapters and the build up to this was good

Was enjoyable and put things in perspective as well

Can you write about her becoming the gang leaders favorite pet slave? Him getting past her escape attempt and her becoming affectionate to him... kinda... and him growing sorta fond of her? Obviously she’s still an object to him but still..

More please! You could have the

More please. Perhaps the 3 of them could get fucked anally with a dildo by other slaves at the same time. Or perhaps a daisy chain where each is ass to mouth. Just some suggestions. Regardless, one of my favorites. I keep coming back to this story.

More please. I'm sure there is more these 3 can be made to do. Great story. One of the best.

Add some pissing, piss drinking moments anf slapping face with spitting on face.

I love this it’s got that loving family vibe with that dark shadow kidnapping and slavery

You do let your dark side out to play witch is good as other writers sre afraid to use it

Keep up the great work

very sexy- mother n sisters eating each out is extremely sexy

kept getting even more sexy what the women did to each other,..more please

I would love to see another chapter or two. This is probably my favorite story I have read. Please write more.

Excellent, you can see the plot grow through the various chapters, well done.

Certainly crossing my fingers for a new chapter