All Comments on 'Mother and Daughter Pay the Bills'

by IllyHymen

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SiodisSiodisabout 4 years ago
Keep going!

This definitely needs more chapters!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518about 4 years ago
Good start

You spent a lot of time on the back story which really made us feel for the characters. The porn shoot was good, but I wanted to know what happened when they got home.

NobleGent45NobleGent45about 4 years ago
So hot I can see the flames and smell the smoke

W O W! ThIs story had me giong fro the first line, waking hard the whole time1

I have only just discovered you - now I must do some searching

Noblegent45

Charlotte87Charlotte87almost 4 years ago
Sensational

You built this story up so well, by the time we got to the mother-daughter sex it was red hot. Please give us more of the adventures of these two horny sluts.

Memut6969Memut6969over 2 years ago

Great story love the difference in the mom and daughters bodies. Very good descriptions and easy to visualize. Please give us more of their relationship. How are things at home? Are they openly lovers? How is mom’s porn career going?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot!!

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Illy Hymen is the author of The Little Goblin Girl and The Storm Mage, both of which are currently available on Amazon. She works professionally as a ghostwriter and editor when guys aren't paying her to beat them up. https://www.amazon.com/Illy-Hymen/e/B07MHWP434 She has wr...