All Comments on 'Mother & Daughter Swap Party Pt. 01'

by Headdress

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AliceGeeAliceGeeover 2 years ago

A very interesting opening chapter. I eagerly await chapter 2.

luvs2watchu2luvs2watchu2over 2 years ago

Very promising beginning. I like the premises very much. I look forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ditto AliceGee.

Alibaba40Alibaba40over 2 years ago

More pseeeeeee.....eagerly awaiting.

Madam_CallistaMadam_Callistaover 2 years ago

mmmmmm very interesting beginning,,,, would love to read more,,,, absolutely love Mother/Daughter stories and where they can go,,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I agree. More, PLEASE! Nice intro and this has great potential.

-jog

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautifully written as what I hope is an introduction to some amazing minglings. Please continue.

foudespitfoudespitabout 2 years ago

Dear Headdress,

Thanks for this story. It was well written, and very exciting. I'm really impatient to read the sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Will we see Part 2 anytime soon?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Keep going, please!

Rifraff123Rifraff12310 months ago

I am disappointed this didn't go farther. Great start.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Oh yes I loved it you did a super job the details were awesome I was kinda led a little to believe she would service her mother guess that's another story I hope great writing job love it

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Not likely. Just stupid and raunchy.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Can't figure out what the point of this was, no character development, no real feeling to it, way too simplistic. What world do you live in that this would be considered normal? Or even slightly feasible?

LizziepeeLizziepeeabout 1 month ago

I was reading this with my hand in my panties thinking it was going to be a really nice long story a bit of a lid down please please write more longer stories Lizzie

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