by Headdress
Very promising beginning. I like the premises very much. I look forward to the next chapter.
mmmmmm very interesting beginning,,,, would love to read more,,,, absolutely love Mother/Daughter stories and where they can go,,,,
Beautifully written as what I hope is an introduction to some amazing minglings. Please continue.
Dear Headdress,
Thanks for this story. It was well written, and very exciting. I'm really impatient to read the sequel...
Oh yes I loved it you did a super job the details were awesome I was kinda led a little to believe she would service her mother guess that's another story I hope great writing job love it
Can't figure out what the point of this was, no character development, no real feeling to it, way too simplistic. What world do you live in that this would be considered normal? Or even slightly feasible?
I was reading this with my hand in my panties thinking it was going to be a really nice long story a bit of a lid down please please write more longer stories Lizzie