by YYsguy
Very well written, kept me interested throughout. Please continue
This story was not at all interesting. It went from her cheating to her recovery to her first fuck in ten years. The fact that it turned out to be with her long lost son was not a surprise. The changing of the name from Alec to Allan didn’t fool anyone. This story was boring, it lacked build up of characters and plot.
A good scenario, especially with the battles that took place in Rhodesia in the late 60's, many white men disappeared from both Zambia and Southern Rhodesia taking their some with them but leaving their wives and daughters to face the unstable situation alone.
Liked the story but some of it lacked substance just started with her cheating on her husband to her being in africa and having sex with a young man who turned out to be her son??????????????? 4 stars
Well you had a decent start but your ending and with the sex scenes was just boring and needs major help