All Comments on 'Mother and her son'

Disjointed is the first word that comes to mind. Nice vignettes, if that’s how it’s supposed to be. Hot? Yes, very. But every time I got into what was happening, you switched and not only chapter to chapter but within as well. It’s a jumble that leaves questions. No real transitions. Is that what you planned?

I agree with "amonymous." This :story" was so disjointed, nothing seemed to make sense as a story normally would. The sex was hot, but this story was written in a style one would attribute to a poorly educated teen. I gave it five stars for the sex content but would only give it one for writing style.

0h my god and WTF?

Cannot finish this. Not a fan of the language style

Wtf do you mean by kicking a hindu out.....