All Comments on 'Mother and Son Reunion'

by ChasPHX

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CZOFTWCZOFTWover 3 years ago
Pretty good

The build-up was terrific but could have used a bit stronger payoff.

BoytitsBoytitsover 3 years ago

Very good thanks for writing, you got a*5* from me

KlitomaticKlitomaticover 3 years ago
Not

Bad, not bad at all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
5 stars are not enough

Extremely sensual, erotic and beautiful -- thank you ChasPHX. Please explore more in this genre.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 3 years ago

I loved the story! Just wished there was some dirty talk once they started fucking. Five stars and a favorite point!

xysterxysterover 3 years ago

I loved your writing. It was a good story, nicely built, only finished too quickly. It moved too fast at the end. I didn't get to savor the best part. Actual consummation seemed robotic. I am glad, I read it, though. Your style is very pleasant.

Soshameless11Soshameless11over 3 years ago

This was fantastic. I loved the slow build as Steve finally got the message Mom has been trying to send him for years. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
WOW

Poor Mom! Son was dumber than a box of rocks, but finally the dumbass got cranking at least. Maybe she can teach him basic fucking, maybe.

Omart57Omart57over 3 years ago
Wow, Wow and

WOW! Very good story! Loved the build to climax , Fantastic finish!

MommysbabyboyMommysbabyboyover 3 years ago

very hot story. well written and arranged. where is the chapter 2???more please.....

Only_connectOnly_connectover 3 years ago

Nice psychology in the build-up. Shame it got a bit too porny once they started the sexy action.

ChasPHXChasPHXover 3 years agoAuthor
Thanks for reading and commenting

I appreciate the time you all took to read my story and comment on it. Thanks for participating! Until next time...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thanks! Licking an unwashed beauty, perhaps it is stinky, a delightful stink that call for undivided attention. What a thought. Delicious. It sort of becomes a bit blasé later. A bit too fast.

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Let's see. I'm a writer by trade, but not a fiction writer. I can tell you it's a professional industry, so it wouldn't do for my employers to know about my, uh, other writing endeavours. I favour shorter stories that emphasize unique situations, or even gimmicks, where the e...