by ChasPHX
The build-up was terrific but could have used a bit stronger payoff.
Extremely sensual, erotic and beautiful -- thank you ChasPHX. Please explore more in this genre.
I loved the story! Just wished there was some dirty talk once they started fucking. Five stars and a favorite point!
I loved your writing. It was a good story, nicely built, only finished too quickly. It moved too fast at the end. I didn't get to savor the best part. Actual consummation seemed robotic. I am glad, I read it, though. Your style is very pleasant.
This was fantastic. I loved the slow build as Steve finally got the message Mom has been trying to send him for years. Well done!
Poor Mom! Son was dumber than a box of rocks, but finally the dumbass got cranking at least. Maybe she can teach him basic fucking, maybe.
WOW! Very good story! Loved the build to climax , Fantastic finish!
very hot story. well written and arranged. where is the chapter 2???more please.....
Nice psychology in the build-up. Shame it got a bit too porny once they started the sexy action.
I appreciate the time you all took to read my story and comment on it. Thanks for participating! Until next time...
Thanks! Licking an unwashed beauty, perhaps it is stinky, a delightful stink that call for undivided attention. What a thought. Delicious. It sort of becomes a bit blasé later. A bit too fast.