by chris99999
Perfect amount of buyers remorse during and after events. Erotic descriptions of body and intimacy that is majestic.
Loved it. Would have preferred a fuller description of her though.
5stars and favourite
It was nice to read something that wasn't cliche. Drivel: "Like a pro"; "pre-cum"; and extorted sex, completely ruins it. Good job!
Well written but I really don't care for the reluctant son/brother stories. They always feel too contrived and totally unbelievable. Sorry.
Good story but you could have done more with the bathroom sharing. I was looking forward to seeing Mom on the toilet.
When the mother speaks using dialogue straight out of one of those late night movie channel 'fake porn' movies, it pretty much ruins any chance anyone would find this believable.
It was a nice story although a little short on the sexual side you should have continued until he found a wife and 3 of them having sex together, gave it 4 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!