All Comments on 'Mother Coming Out'

Good and erotic! A fine and SEXY story. Really enjoyed it. Thank you

Nobody but nobody. Is that dumb.With the internet every man at 18 is knowledgable.ruined the story.

Very enjoyable read. Just enough sex scenes with the right amount of background story. As a man who loves to wear panties, I would love to have this story continued and have the mother dress her son in lingerie, but that is just my little kink.

Very uncomfortable when authors portray a 19 year old man as a 12 year old boy.

"You sucked on them as... I even had a orgasm or two". Such sensual dialogue. Tenderly written from beginning to end with beautiful reminiscence.

Loved it

More please,

reads as if it was edited from a little boy to a college kid to sneak it past the censors, but the dialogue has no validity when applied to a young man of college age. Really creepy, or he's got some mental issues that would preclude him from a normal college.

Son was way over done as simple minded, innocent. No romance or affection between son and mother in this one.

Most excellent !!!!!

I have to agree that making a college aged kid as naive as you made him, detracts from the story. Your writing style is fairly good, but making a college aged kid as inexperienced as a 12-13 year old just gets in the way of the story telling and makes the story a little creepy.

You are one of the best writers on this site in my opinion and one that draws me to a story just because I see that you wrote it, BUT, this was not your best work. I feel almost sacrilegious correcting you, but when the same word is misspelled probably half a dozen times, it's beyond distracting! DINING ROOM only has 1 N. And I also agree with many of the others that his lack of sexual knowledge at his age was beyond believable.

Porn screen writers sure could use some of your imagination and dialogue. They are so stale unimaginative.

the romance was kinda missing for my taste

One of the best for me!

Very nice story but you could have made the son a little about sex at his age and you should have continued with more cause the sex was a little short still gave it4 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plenty of story left. please continue.

Mom certainly had taken on a lot of remedial work to bring her son up to speed during Thanksgiving. For a winter contest entry, this was just right. Not too long and with enough content to introduce the setting and actions. Leaves me time to read the other entries, I hope.

I noticed some repetitiveness and reference to wit/witty in the story. The third time I began to think another descriptor might be needed to convey the meaning. Yet, overall it wasn't a distractor to the plot.

I enjoyed your story very much.

cant wait for next installment

Aaaaahhhh. The stuff that dreams are made of. Brill. More please.

Hot as Hell, every Son needs a loving Mom like this one. Five stars, and thank you for it.

Very nice story loved how mother taught her son how to love a woman, but you should continue with more of mother teaching her son!! Gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

4 stars only, i am sorry, would have enjoyed more panties tease.

you didn't have any ass play, with tongue like his surely have to

try....... I still think your story is tops

really great read keep up the great work. next chapter please.

Very nice read hope you continue with this??? There is so much more she needs to teach him gave it a 5.

Awesome 5 stars but you need to continue and see where it goes from here????

Son was too naive and hesitant for me, sorry.

Think that the Mother and Son fall Love together