All Comments on 'Mother-in-Law Becomes My Lover'

Beautiful, straight sex. Love it!

*****Enjoyable sexy read. Thanks for sharing.

She should be a regular long term visitor to his bed.

Very enjoyable. Would love to hear more of the affair. And what about Sarah? There are so many possibilities

Good story. Get a proofreader/editor to clean up the punctuation and grammar.

Straight forward and hot. Some more chapters, please. Maybe add Sarah.

It was good for a first story. The extensive run on paragraph at the end of page one was distracting and lent nothing to the story. Maybe watch out for that in the future and if you want to continue having loyal readers stay away from the cuck bullshit.

Great story, totally believable and very well written. Please write more stories.

Great story and sex. Lol forward to more writings from you.

I liked it but you ended it wrongly ,

The story seemed very good and interesting, and well written, but you lost me with the long paragraphs, mainly the huge one on the first page. Reading it on a phone makes it difficult to see where you are after scrolling. May it's age, I'm 69.

You should break up your stories in edible bits. In that huge paragraph, you seem to be quickly telling a story without taking time to breathe. If you don't need to, maybe the readers need the pause.

Good read! Not exagearted abig + +.

Glad the daughter left him. Having an affair with his mil because Bill is 15 years older is just a demonstration of what an asshole he is.

Sexy story.I hope that sequel is soon .submitted

Cinco Estrellas!

Please write more, and give sexy Paul some sexy chest hair for his manly chest!

Quite good, but that ending....

I liked the story. Great first story I look forward to reading more of your work. I have to agree with some of the previous comments in that the large paragraphs were a little distracting.

Great stuff. Bring on the sequel.

Very good, she sounds like a mistress in the making

Great story hope for more

more please

That was a hot read. Hope you're able to share more of your adventures during the eight month affair. Would be interested to know if your ex found out you were banging her mother and how / why your affair ended.

"just I wasn't sure how it looked from your prospective"

P-E-R-S-P-E-C-T-I-V-E

Many thanks, that was quite erotic. Whilst I don't enjoy incest at all, an 'in-law' is not a biological relationship so I could live with it.

Love MIL porn. Hot yet sweet. Good story. How about more of that

good story; almost comes across as true?

How about another chapter and bring in Sarah for a threesome?

Thank you for reading my story and then taking the time to post the positive comments and constructive feedback.

In hindsight I agree that some of the paragraphs are too long and the ending left a lot to be desired.

It was a first attempt and I will try to learn from my mistakes.

Thanks.

A really great first effort. We all hope you’ll share more of this or other new adventures.