All Comments on 'Mother in Law is My Girlfriend'

Just another cheating asshole, with a mother that has no respect for her own child.

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If you are going to write in English, learn how dialogue is punctuated. The format you use is okay for scripts but NOT prose. English uses quotation marks, such as the following. (At least I think this is what you were trying to say. The lack of punctuation in general and the poor syntax made it hard to understand what you were trying to write.:

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Savitha said, "oh Ravi.... sorry. I am sorry. Her saree was on the floor. She was searching and I was enjoying the view."

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I replies, "I thought you were in the guest room. I am sorry, too."

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Now that I started trying to make sense of those sentences, I have to expand on my initial comment.

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Learn basic English.

Wonderful story, divine feeling sex has no boundaries mother in law is lucky.

Great read, awaiting for next part.

This is good and realistic. Keep on....install grammarly, it helps

Why not continue! It's quite amorous!