All Comments on 'Mother Masseuse Pt. 01'

Great story. Descriptive, great sex, good balance. Can't wait for future chapters.

am looking forward to the next chapter

I think it would help the story to make the sex scenes longer, more descriptive, and possibly a little dirtier. I guess that's personal preference, though, and the story really is good. I liked the upbeat and positive tone, and the characters felt pretty plausible.

Awesome! The humorous banter between the pair was a complete turn on. I also liked how Chad came in, like, milliseconds during the initial "accidental" fuck. That's realistic!

You could have stopped after the first act, and it would have been a good quickie, but I’m glad you didn’t. Exploring the feelings between them afterwards, and the comical element of the mask and shower cap made this a great incest story.

Keep up the good work!

Really like this take on the “massage story”. excited to read more.

At least one more chapter I hope.

Your story was very well written in relation to most of the other stories I have read on this site. The fact that it was so well written made it easy and enjoyable to read. It also prompted me to take a look at your other submissions. They too were very good.

I hope you follow up on this tale as the 'Pt. 01' implies. I imagine I know how this story might progress and am anxious to see how close I am in predicting how future stories will unfold.

Maybe involve her two friends?

"Twixt your nethers?"

hmmmmmmm...

firefly reference?

Maybe another chapter or 2 on how mother and son seduce her two friends.

Fantastic loved the story, write more & more!

Terrific story, well thought out good character development ! An easy enjoyable

story line.

Finally! !! A story with Humor as well as sexy banter and sex. By far the best story I have had the pleasure of reading thus far. I look forward to more.

A truly fabulous read!

5 stars but why have you stopped writing