All Comments on 'Mother May I? Ch. 01'

I look forward to part 2 :)

Kristin

Love it and also look forward to Part 2, 3 and how many others you care to write.........

I really enjoyed this, you put together a great story and you did the scenes superbly but you do have one section that Ryan's name got switched to Chad. Did it stop me from reading the rest of the story or making me look forward to the next installment..... Hardly! Thanks for a great story and I am looking forward to next chapter!

Very good start. Can't wait for more

Need more quick...

great story , a real turn for me can not wait for more

Good start to what promises to be an interesting story, looking forward to the next chapter, and more.

great story hope there is chapters with more mom and sons

Nice concept to the mom/son incest. Nice to see a fresh idea like this.

Very hot!!

Great story idea ,can't wait for more!!!!

great start, please continue!!

i eagerly await the next installment

Loved the story. The tension build up is very hot and I look forward to the continuation of the story.

Please do continue! :-)

Yo man when r u going to add chapter 2 the suspension is literally killing me.

also a prequel abotu the couple that they watched on TV- how did they get into it, what they were thinking, etc

i've been checking once a week for almost a year now waiting for the next part........please please please post it! ;)

Please do continue! :-)

I certainly hope you continue with this story, there are so many possibilities.

This story is excellent. I need more chapters. ASAP :)

This actually wasnt that bad. Considering how half the stories I read on this site tend to make me depressed as hel . I really enjoyed this. Please write another chapter

more please

so good

😊

So far, so good. Next chapter now please , , , ,

Eh. A wast of time as It died on the vine with no further chapters.