by autoplot
Just because you know a lot about silly computer games please don't bore us with the details.
The best chapter so far. I love the potential possibilities that are opening up. At least this time Beth will be able to ask for copies of the photo shoot. Five stars.
I appreciate the slight jump forward, not boring us with the details of 2 weeks of Mom-Dylan sex, which gets old and doesn't further the story.
Well paced, with great bulld-up and possibilities.
Looking forward to what's next.
This is a great series and I can't wait to see where it goes. However, don't rush to get the chapters out and make sure you proof read. (In paragraph 13 of Chapter 4, Justin is incorrectly identified as Dylan.)
Thanks for the sharp eye, anon, I'll try to find that error and correct it when I can.
Do not bring the sisters together. Leave that as a fantasy if you need it to be in the story. Mother/son & aunt/nephew plus a 3-some is more than enough story.
Don't ruin it.
The story's already finished and submitted in full, those decisions have been made (and pretty well telegraphed).
I read all four stories just now; I know Justin will be getting his soon. Sorry, that was chapter 5 in the collection of stories I've imagined. Perhaps a new series involving the sisters and of course, an orgy to tie it all together! I liked the series; I have an imaginary MILF to stand in as mother, but it is a rare fantasy. Good work with the story.
RS
Very sexy with lots of twists and turns. I cant wait to see what happens next.
A very hot story but I do wonder if she ends up fucking her son a little too quickly? I think perhaps you could have strung things out a little before consummating the incestuous relationship. Still a very, very good story, though.