All Comments on 'Mother’s New Governess Ch. 02'

Why do you feel you have to explain everything? Then you give an explanation and tell us to look it up.

Sign me up for the rest of the story.

I definitely want to read how this continues as well as how the womens' plan for financial security goes.

In reading this story you become a fly on the wall, imersed in the happenings and events. The storm in the back round seems telling of something to come, only time will tell. I cannot wait to see where this story goes, please let us know when we will be able to enjoy more of you amazing story.

I particularly like the stream of consciousness style asides in response to your own prose.

Pray continue, that we may cry "Author! Author!" upon its conclusion.

I earnestly await the continuation of this saga.

And where are the sisters in this schmorgasbord?

Great first two chapters. Am looking forward to reading many more. Would have given more stars but they only have 5.

Eagerly awaiting Chapter 3...

However, what happened to Chapter 2? Content seems to now have been replaced by the text of Chapter 1.

Cliches and metaphor phrases to hold anyone's attention. 3 stars best I can give

your story was well thought out, well presented, and very well written. Keep going.

Such arousing ajecetives!! I'm reading this in the waiting room and I hope the doctor doesn't see me just yet--because imma go read chapter 3!!!

One of the best