by brucewayneegypt
All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.
What is the point of writing a "spoof," as you call this, one definition being a 'good-natured hoax," if this kind of relationship interests you?
The sentences sound cut-and-pasted together. You want to reduce your "story" to an extended cliche'.
I suppose you could be forgiven if it was funny, but it isn't.
I really enjoyed this story. It gets into the action quick. A great read if you want to get off quick. Looking forward to the next chapter.
It doesn't look like a story. It is fit to be categorised as a documentary. I expect the next part with all the ingredients of a story
Enormously exciting, enamouring experience of Mother-Son duo turning into virtual couple. Mother and Son are the Original Couple. In Mother, a man perceives his wife! In his wife, the husband seeks his Mother. If, by quirk of destiny, Mother and Son become couple, Gates of Heaven open for them, literally and metaphorically. Kudos to Author. Ramesh69691@outlook.com