All Comments on 'Mother, Son and Taboo'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Why?

What is the point of writing a "spoof," as you call this, one definition being a 'good-natured hoax," if this kind of relationship interests you?

The sentences sound cut-and-pasted together. You want to reduce your "story" to an extended cliche'.

I suppose you could be forgiven if it was funny, but it isn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
It's a fair story

I do not like the anal, I'm not gay...

MetalEdgeNewsMetalEdgeNewsover 4 years ago
Quick read

I really enjoyed this story. It gets into the action quick. A great read if you want to get off quick. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
what's going on here

what a shit show what a waste of time

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Documentary

It doesn't look like a story. It is fit to be categorised as a documentary. I expect the next part with all the ingredients of a story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

nice start

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Enormously exciting, enamouring experience of Mother-Son duo turning into virtual couple. Mother and Son are the Original Couple. In Mother, a man perceives his wife! In his wife, the husband seeks his Mother. If, by quirk of destiny, Mother and Son become couple, Gates of Heaven open for them, literally and metaphorically. Kudos to Author. Ramesh69691@outlook.com

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