All Comments on 'Mother Tricked into Betrayal Pt. 02'
by Jayden_1
- 7 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoThe dutiful wife is now like im good i dont need a family at 46. Its insane and just so left. Its not even possibly real but whatever 1 star for lack of back story details and realism.
Anonymousover 4 years agoIn the first part of this story you said that his father was "22 years older" than his mom and now you tell that he was "63 years of age" and "mom is 43 years old"!That makes ONLY A 20 YEARS DIFFERENCE between them,NOT 22!YOU CONFUSE PEOPLE with such MISTAKES!YOU SHOULD CORRECT them!
Then,YOU DON'T EXPLAIN AT ALL how could his mother marry that boy WITHOUT DIVORCING HIS FATHER FIRST!That's A NONSENSE!And IT'S NOT TOO PLAUSIBLE that both his mother and her friend,the woman that he married,become pregnant TWICE at their age!They both were IN THEIR MID-FORTIES and WOMEN DO NOT BECOME PREGNANT EASY at that age!
Finally,I HAVE TO DISAGREE with another person who said in a comment that "it's not even possibly real" that "the dutiful wife is now like I'm good I don't need a family at 46"!That IS WRONG!Such a thing SADLY HAPPENS SOMETIMES!IT'S NOT UNREALISTIC and IT'S DEFINITELY "POSSIBLY REAL"!And,besides that,she did that AT 43 YEARS OLD,NOT AT 46!Some people SHOULD READ BETTER a story before commenting it!
Anonymousover 4 years agoIn the first part of this story you said that his father was "22 years older" than his mom and now you tell that he was "63 years of age" and "mom is 43 years old"!That makes ONLY A 20 YEARS DIFFERENCE between them,NOT 22!YOU CONFUSE PEOPLE with such MISTAKES!YOU SHOULD CORRECT them!
Then,YOU DON'T EXPLAIN AT ALL how could his mother marry that boy WITHOUT DIVORCING HIS FATHER FIRST!That's A NONSENSE!And IT'S NOT TOO PLAUSIBLE that both his mother and her friend,the woman that he married,become pregnant TWICE at their age!They both were IN THEIR MID-FORTIES and WOMEN DO NOT BECOME PREGNANT EASY at that age!
Finally,I HAVE TO DISAGREE with another person who said in a comment that "it's not even possibly real" that "the dutiful wife is now like I'm good I don't need a family at 46"!That IS WRONG!Such a thing SADLY HAPPENS SOMETIMES!IT'S NOT UNREALISTIC and IT'S DEFINITELY "POSSIBLY REAL"!And,besides that,she did that AT 43 YEARS OLD,NOT AT 46!Some people SHOULD READ BETTER a story before commenting it!
Anonymousover 4 years agoYou made the mother too unidimensional. And the son was a whiny brat.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoWhat in the Holy fuck?!?!
An interesting premise, at least from the point of view, but it was so slapped together, the odd first person omnipotent narrator didn't help. Then the friend was always in love with the weirdo. Bizarre and that's being nice.
