All Comments on 'Motherhood - A Tale of Love Ch. 01'

by shotacon1

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mcbtwsmcbtwsover 6 years ago
Vomit Inducing.

This is absolutely the worst thing written, ever!

SomethingInTheWaySheMovesSomethingInTheWaySheMovesover 6 years ago
There's a reason readers complain about stories written by authors for whom English is not their first language:

It's because unless you're REALLY fluent in English, the story usually doesn't translate very well. And sometimes, it translates REALLY BADLY. This is one of those "badly translated" stories. I can't believe you came back for a second chapter. Please don't subject anyone to a third chapter. The ratings for this series are steadily decreasing, and they were pretty shitty to start with.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Great story, hope to read more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Move on

if you dont like it move on, dont keep commenting that its bad when the ratings are 4+

shotacon1shotacon1about 6 years agoAuthor

if someone is willing to provide a better translation i will re-upload it.

armando100armando100about 6 years ago
nice!

really liked the story.

messerschmiedmesserschmiedover 5 years ago
Truly a Masterpiece

Most sensual story I've ever read !!

nil_r2nil_r2almost 5 years ago
Good story well told

Sensual story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

One of the best stories I have read - I loved the femdom aspects and wish there are more. please write another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

this story has been published in a comics alongside some other parts of Amarsrostha creation. u can found this mom son comics in "allporncomics" site.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Just what i have been looking for thank for sharing.Awesome story of love,lust and motherhood.thumbs up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

This story should be pinned on the homepage, bravo!

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