All Comments on 'Mothers and Daughters Pt. 12'

Great series! Keep it up!

That's the story. Thank you for all your comments and feedback.

If you liked this story, try my other story - The Commander - in the Mind Control category.

Deltablonde

So, we don't find out if she stays with Nate or goes home? If that's the case, then it was a waste of time.

Delta has left you to imagine the outcome of your choice just as Frank Stockton did in his short story way back in 1880. Grownups don't have to have every story end in "and they lived happily ever after." On the other hand, if you beg nicely, who knows, there might be an epilogue. Either way, this was a series well worth reading. Thank you, Delta!

Nicely done!!!!

Come on?...just a couple of more chapters...please

I will write one final chapter. It will take a week or two.

Deltablonde

I was really digging the story, but I'm confused on some things.

Why title it Mothers and Daughters if it is really only about 1 mother and 1 daughter?

Why mention anything about Pavlina's poor abused mother? Couldn't have Pavlina just skipped out on going home without all the back story?

Was Brianna mentioning that her mom had the hots for Nate a lie? It was never addressed again.

If the story ends as you wish... They fly into Nate'slife, he tries to get his money worth out of them for sex, and they fly out of his life... Strange to have really no resolution or point behind anything.

Have them become a happy couple who do secret agent things together. Hunting down Privion who is a Russian Spy