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As she lay there with her knees raised and her thighs wide apart and spunk dribbling from her cunt, she knew she must look l like some cheap dockside whore, but she didn't give a fuck.
Michael had opened Pandora's box, and Susan was now going to rip it's lid off.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 2 years agoWould have been 5 stars but for silly mistakes like words missing and name changes. Plus doubtful the mother would use the word cunt on their first fuck or at all. Still a good storyline 4 stars
Anonymousabout 2 years agoSloppy. Should have read through it before posting then you could have decided whether he was Michael or Matthew. The
language she used was unrealistic seeing it was her son.
Mandal46over 4 years agoMichael became Mathew then back to Michael more than once. Not an error that detracted one from the story but a quick read through before submitting would have spotted and corrected the errors. Still a 5* score.
writerjabover 4 years agoYour narration of events, while definitely rushed, was well done. But then mom’s words felt inconsistent to the mood of the story. Cum slut? Let the two love each other first!
live4thebjover 4 years agoNot completely bad but two specific things.
1. It is very choppy.
2. The word sex is a noun not a name and because of that you do not capitalize the s.
But not all that bad so you get ***
