by fasthand
The peeing at the end took it to a much higher level than anticipated. Epitome of love.
Few things feel better than a finger massaging your prostate and a hand job at the same time. Please continue this story and hope she wears a strapon and jerks him off at the same time.
I really enjoyed your story and the golden shower at the end was a nice and horny surprise. Thank you
This is so hot! Vivid description of the mood and mental. Please continue, more like this.
I have submitted multiple stories but the editors keep rejecting them but won't tell me why. I obviously know how to fucking write properly. They refuse to give me a specific reason why they reject ALL of my new stories. WTF????
@fasthand if editors are rejecting your stories upload them with a new user name or on a different site altogether but keep em coming please, tell us in comments what you're planning.
I don't know of other sites. I will try again to get mine listed. If not, then off to somewhere else. What REALLY pisses me off is they won't tell you WHY they rejected a story. How can it get fixed if you don't know WHAT to fucking fix???????
2d read for me. so erotic, just think it should have been in their private backyard pool.
Fucking awesome story, all or you stories are great. Did you find another platform?
Thanks everyone for the kind comments. For some reason the editors have been rejecting all my stories in the last 5-6 months. ALL of them & they NEVER tell me why. All my stories are nicely rated. I clearly know how to write a readable story & I use spell/grammar check before submitting. Yet they send every single one back as "rejected". I've about had enough of their bullshit, quite honestly. Thank you for reading.
@fasthand plz continue the school nurse story.... your works are great!!! THANKS A LOT!!!
Editors are still rejecting ALL of my submissions, yet they won't say why. 5-5 stories now have been rejected, Has to be personal as most of my stories are 4.5 or higher. Sorry, readers.