Mother's Helper Ch. 05

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"You mean..." Guy roared with laughter. "Oh for fuck's sake. The only thing that would beat that would be you telling me you're fucking him, too.

"Uh, Dad..."

*****EPILOGUE*****

Rita and Paul moved in with Guy, and continued their life style, including Guy in as many of the activities as they could. With the cancer, he was impotent, but, demonstrating on Rita, showed Paul a number of ways to bring a woman to a screaming orgasm in the relatively short time he had left.

Sally had a little boy, and named him after his great grandfather, the only one in the family. After Guy passed on, she moved in with Rita.

Patti found someone whom she cherished, and who felt the same way about her. The wedding was almost spoiled when Paul visited her in the bride's dressing room at the church. As soon as he walked into the room, she felt herself open for him. Di and Kitty spent fifteen minutes licking the cream from her pussy and panties. Their kisses to Patti left her with a strange taste which puzzled Jerry, the groom.

Di went on to a career in fashion modeling, working at a well known department store in Chicago. On her twenty-first birthday, Paul gave her a not very unique present–nine months of pregnancy. A girl.

Paul married Kitty. They had twin girls, whom they raised with Di's daughter. They moved in with Kitty's parents, and Paul got to know his mother-in-law very well. In between modeling gigs, Di would visit them. Sometimes, Patti came to visit also. One big happy fucking family. You know what happened when the twins and Di's daughters turned eighteen.

Patti and Jerry divorced when she caught him trying to feel up her sister. Go figure.

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midatlstorymanmidatlstorymanabout 1 month ago

Patti divorced Jerry for making moves on Di when she had obviously not been faithful? That doesn't vibe with the rest of the story. I agree with another poster. This last appeared to be rushed and not thought out. Overall, a good story.

DwarfLord50DwarfLord507 months ago

Yeah, I have to agree with previous posts. I enjoyed the early chapters, but it went off the rails in the last half. I think adding Kitty was one woman too much for me, and adding in grandpa just seemed silly to me. I found it hard to believe Paul forgave Patti for fooling around behind his back. Being honest up front was the only thing he asked of her and she blew that off. Oh well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it and the very enjoyable ending. I am not a writer and I don't critique writers, I just know what I like and don't like.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Enjoyed the story. Wish te major characters were more developed indepth and breadth. Finally, I would like to know what happened with thr mother (Rita). I believe you probably got tired/bored with this story. The first 3 chapters were good. Chapter 4 & 5 slipped because you rushed the epilogue.

ukrainianukrainianalmost 2 years ago

Sadly I have to agree with your other readers. Your story but I wish I'd not read from two onward. I can't even date this chapter. Sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wtf is this ending?! Seriously redo everything

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

A good storyline with some great characterisation, situations that could easily occur in small town America, but it became rather farcical when Guy was explaining his role in the towns fertility rate.

A beautifully crafted, prepared and written work, thank you for publishing this excellent story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
why trash it in the end

Was fully onboard even with some of the outlandish claims because overall it is fiction but why go and ruin it with this last idiotic chapter. You went so far off the rails I now regret spending the time with the first 4 chapters also. First time ever reading your work but if this was an example of the way you tend to end your stories, no thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Too many

Too many people fucking at the end. Also, hate Pattie for not keeping to her word about fucking someone behind Paul's back. She knew and accepted the situation beforehand. She the person that I don't like now.

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477sabout 5 years ago
Good story

I liked the story and am ok with the ending but too many partners ruins a good story. The way you built up Paul and Patti love then just throw it away to have her going around fucking other guys behind his back left a sour taste and really lost all interest in her character. You created many good characters in this story that could have been used for other Good stories but were wasted and lost in this one giant fuck fest.

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