All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 24'

You returned!!! Miracle!:)

Mr. Spanker, You are back !! With my favorite story of all time..

Thank you !

Why?

I found this episode to be a insult the same old bull shit repeated over and over!

Keep on

How about a new chapter of Nudist Family Holiday?

Great to see you back on here. Your amazing stories have been missed recently.

Missed ya

I have to re read the previous chapters again for a refresher.

Glad your back. I just love this story.

Wow! Never thought I would see another chapter.

I hope you continue your writing and I hope to see an update for your other story as well should you decide to come back.

Can't wait to see what comes next in this series as well as nudist family holiday!

Okay, not gonna lie. Parts of this chapter seemed kind of rushed . . . especially since we've been waiting over a year. Confusing Alison with Angela? Come on now. But, you know what? I don't even care. I'm just glad that the Spanker is back! And that plot twist at the end? Bobby didn't rescue Alison from mean Mr Petty . . . Alison rescued Bobby from an acute case of the blue balls inflicted on him by Petty's tool, Erica! Classic Dick_Spanker surprise! I loved it! Unfortunately, it left me wanting more. Man! Hope we don't have to wait another 16 months for a new chapter.

I'm glad your back to writing my friend, you were missed. Loved the story and hope to see more soon, thanks.

I enjoyed this story. Would be nice when Allison finally allow Bobby to have intercourse with her willingly.

Started really good and had some real promise. The last few chapters stink and it's getting worse.. Sorry could have been good.

Read all these in one sitting. Wish there were 10 more chapters. Hoping they team up to destroy the old man and then all get together in the end. Great writing and please keep it up!

FINALLY! I‘m so glad you’re back in action! Don’t let us waiting for so lang anymore

Started out as an awesome tale. Lost me with the ladt 2 chapters

You took a great story and ruined it

And please continue. You've still got fans

I appreciate you coming back to salvage the story. To say "you better nake this good" is an understatement. I still don't like the abuse scenes and hope you will refrain from them. If you go back to abusing the female lead, youve lost me.

Thanks so much for giving us this chapter. Can’t wait for the next one.

I don’t care about anything, just please continue and close it off well whenever you please

I was hoping u changed after what u did in the next chapter and it seems the villian is destroying several families. U had an awesome story till u brought the tormentor in. Sorry to say I will never read your story again. The ones liking it r probably those that like abuse. Its fine if both parties r into it--force is never a good thing even in a story

Please keep going! I love the way this is headed

This is by far my favorite series on this site, I come back to it all the time and have read it in it's entirety multiple times. I really hope you continue it and give the series the closure it deserves, but either way I'll probably keep rereading the adventures of Bobby and Alison.

Keep the stories coming. Great series and excellent writing.

You just.killed a great stroy with this chapter

Seriously, you used to be the best on this site. Your other series was going somewhere too, but what's the point on waiting for a series to continue when other better series like the Elise Employee series are going, or the Just one of the guys series has been resurrected to great effect?

Seriously, you had fans who backed you here, who supported you and they do deserve to know what's going on at least?

Welcome back, and thank you for the new chapter - it's an interesting twist which makes the story different to the myriad of others on this site and I am looking forward to seeing how this pans out!

I’m not really into the whole blackmail thing and I really hope you don’t have Allison get gang raped in the next chapter but this one leaves a bit of hope for Bobby and Allison to continue together. With her pregnant now it leads to the possibility of Bobby getting his dream of having her a a wife and a few harrowing chapters of their plan together to escape and live free. Plus we already know from the vacation that Allison really does want to make love to him and feel him cum inside her again and again. I just hope this continues as soon as your life allows you to devote the time to writing.

Just a quick note to say I am putting the finishing touches to Ch 25 which is likely to be the last one for MHH. Some of you commented on the typos in Ch 24 and apologies for that. I currently don't have an editor so if there is anyone out there who would like the job please let me know via email. I have a few other ideas for stories which I would like to work on, however writing for free does mean it's limited by my spare time so I may well be publishing them on smashwords.

Can't wait for the next chapter:)

While I appreciate the freeness of the space your writing is so good I would be down with smashwords. Just give the word

blackmail/tormentor ruined the whole thing..so stupid.

Any idea DS?

When are you posting ch 25?

Anything new from Dick_Spanker would make for a very merry Christmas! But I understand writing takes time and effort, which can sometimes be in short supply.

An update, then? Are you still planning to publish on Smashwords? Do you have an account we can follow? What's the status of chapter 25? Anything planned for Nudist Family Holiday? I'm dying to know!

It was great to hear from you again after all this time, and the promise of new DS content has me feeling like a kid waiting to open his presents on Christmas morning.

This story was a good one until you ran the blackmailing crap into the ground. IT'S TIME TO END THIS BS.

Please get back in track with Booby and Alison. The could do do much more together. Get busy. We are waiting!!!!

No end huh DS? *shrug*. Way to end on a crap note :(

Is it happening or what man?

I just wanted to tell you, this was a great story, it had actually a storyline rather than just sex. I know that kind of sounds cheesy but for me I am from the old school porn where there was a story along with the porn, not just sex with nothing except the act. Keep up the great work.

Took a great story and made it just suck