All Comments on 'Mothers Know Best Ch. 01'

Happened often with our parents generation

Narrative is a little stunted with multiple short sentences. Other than cursory mention of some attraction/interest you jump straight into rubbing lotion all of his MIL, then a blowjob. No narrative about implications or her daughter, so I'm a "no" on this one... 2*

That was a good story and I'd like to read about their first fuck too. Keep writing.

It was good but would have been much better if you'd have worked up to it. Let them trade looks and suggestions before the actual touching of nipples and ...

You need an editor for basic grammar things, but I like the story.

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